moment in time writing

The person I am going to talk to you about is 10 years old and turning 11 in July.  She  is called Aysha.She has short brown hair and brown eyes.

She likes to play with her cousin Ava because she is cute and funny. Aysha also likes to play with babies because she finds them cute and funny to play with .

One of her favourite things to do is play netball with her friends.Aysha loves to make youtube videos and watch other people’s videos on youtube.

Aysha dislikes other people bossing her around and people telling her she is not right.

Some of her best friend go this school like Libby, Zara,Kaira and me. Some do not go to this school like Brooke.W  and  Amber.W. So that is Aysha Henderson, one of my best friends In the world.

writing camp letter

WALT: Write a camp thank you letter


 11th April 2017 Annabel Year 6 Hub Oaklands School Dear Nick, I am writing to you to thank you for coming on camp and making sure our bunk room was clean and tidy. A highlight from camp was doing all of the activities, my favourite activity was cooking pancakes on the Hobo Stoves. The most challenging part was doing the milk crate stacking activity. It was great that you had a go too. It was impressive that you got right to the top and touched the roof. I demonstrated collaboration by working in a group for the fashion show and we won so I was happy. I showed belonging by doing all activities and participating My favourite meal at camp was the hotdogs for lunch. The weather was really bad but I enjoyed doing archery and air rifles to replace the canoeing and raft building. I was disappointed by not being able to do the outside activity that we were supposed to do but had fun anyway. I had a great time and I’d like to ask you some questions. What was a highlight from camp for you? What was the most challenging part for you?


 Yours sincerely, Annabel